Wednesday, August 24, 2005

 

Timestream Cover 2


New back and front cover. Lightened the
subtitle, put the byline in the same font,
opaqued the hamster - all good changes, I
think. Thanks Shreyas!

Also put the bottom strip in a complementing off-white, which I think looks good. Logo and back copy may still change.

Comments:
Nice cover art! Two things:

The front cover, which is otherwise great, swallows the "by Nathan Paoletta" bit, and "A Roleplaying Game". They don't have a lot of contrast with the ground.

I think the font on the subtitle might look nice used for the byline as well.

Second thing, I'd like the cool hamster on the back cover better if he were opaque. He looks a little weird with the swirl showing through his head.
 
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